cotton, computers, computations, cats, Cids
and Reagents.
games, idolatry, pens, learned scholars,
depression, anxiety, insecurity
the break down of a man's pride um and the
revival of those old ways.
travel?
the car the sundial boundless ENJOYments of friendship
pools trips to allies
the rhythm of the sheets,
watching struggle, boostin' feet
Some supernal failures:
>libraries to read kiss littered cartons
>films to absorb disinterested falcons
>beautiful people and situations full of yellowy lamp light and boo! and off-the-mark meanings
Crippled by the fears of a world that's already
safe, it's so much to remember for those crystallized by privileges.
this smoky skeezy scatalogical soul giver,
TANKING your soul and giving you a new one.
maybe... if the God wanted me never to understand completely,
even the best gifts.
archeological finds come with the toll of lives and
why should such kerned + tracked, light and giving thoughts
come with the price tag of ignorance and such gravitational duty?
who gave them the right to sell their books?
asking an exchange for the echo in the perfect room,
finds and details
swaying lanterns and campfire stories
and love and sensitivity and perspective
they are for nothing if they can only be obtained by a few
what is humanity if it isn't
one big body
[[things to change/consider...
what COULD you know?
selfish critique? us v. them...over and over again
more work between archaeology, tracking + kerning
arch-discovering/unearthing the past
trac-pursuing things by the trail they leave behind. relationship between all things in typography...one big body...also textual
kern-relationship between two specific things]]
2 comments:
great work, the title is PERFECT
i like how you're using start with what you know as advice and as critique and then wander back and forth between what you know and what you want to know..
and how the work the poem does is question what you COULD know
it seems like kind of a selfish critique though (me vs. them?)
"archeological finds come with the toll of lives" loved this, i would have liked to see more work between archeology and tracking and kerning.
tracking: pursuing things by the things they leave behind, and typographically its the relationship between all things (one big bodY (ALSO textual!)) kerning: kind of in contrast with tracking is about the relationship between two specific thing. maybe there is a way to use that?
ANYWAY keep it up!
thanks so much 4 those ben!! im thinking about what to change with rhem!
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